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         After the blast, the cyan hedgehog fell onto the ground, and crimson gushed out of his mouth, and his wounds. Dark stared at him, unable to take it all in at once. He glanced at her with his purple orbs, still filled with extreme happiness for something she could not comprehend. She rushed to his side, and kneeled beside him.
   ¨No, ¨she started, ¨You can´t.¨ she urged him as if she had any control over the situation. He only responded with his usual smile, and tears suddenly forced themselves out of her, as much as she tried to suppress them, she could no longer contain the sheering pain in her heart.
      She closed her eyes tightly, and suddenly, his hand caressed her muzzle. She opened her eyes hesitantly, yet he was in the same condition. Nothing had changed. She couldn´t wake up from the nightmare. ¨Why…why are you-¨ She couldn´t force out the words. He sat up, looking in extreme pain, and the crimson seeped out of him in rivers. Yet her wrapped his arms around her, a hushed her sobbing. Her tears continued to run, and shocked, she simply let him comfort her.
    Suddenly, he began to choke out a tune in an angelic voice,
¨I remember tears streaming down your face when I said I´d never let you go..
When all the shadows almost killed your light..
I remember you said, ´don´t leave me alone´
But all that´s dead and gone in the past…
Just close your eyes..The sun is going down..
You´ll be alright…No one can hurt you know..
Come morning light…you and I´ll be safe..and..sound..¨

She only sobbed harder, and his breaths came in sharp gasps, but his voice continued to play.
¨Don´t you dare look out your window..Dark, everything´s on fire,
The war outside your door keeps raging on…
Hold on to this lullaby, even when the music´s gone..

He held her weaker, and she clinged to his almost lifeless body. He was comforting her. He, who was in extreme pain and agony, smiled at her, and sang to her. She didn´t need the comfort, HE needed the comfort. Then why…Why was this happening?
His voice became raspier, but he continued the melody.
¨Just close your eyes…The sun is going down…
You´ll be alright.. No one can hurt you know..
Come morning and I´ll be safe…and..sound..¨

His voice was merely a whisper now.
¨Just close your eyes…You´ll be alright…
Come morning light, you and I´ll…sound..¨

His body collapsed on her´s, his cold lips pressed against her´s, and his eyes shut, but his smile remained. She pulled away from his body, and stared up at the sky. Her lips mouthed… ¨Safe…and…sound…¨ she ran her fingers through Light´s quills, and sobbed.
The others watched, in complete silence.
One of the final parts of the story Ive been working on for so long.
Patience, darlings, patience c:
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shineomnimon Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*hides tissue's* i didnt cry <A>
I'm sure you didn't ;D
shineomnimon Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
shoosh ;A;
LovexPeacexJoy Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Dude, this is seriously amazing. You're a really talented writer! So much depth and emotion.
Just a beautiful piece. I can't wait for the story to come out! <333
As soon as i get back to the US i'll continue to work on it more in depth. I really have to plan this one out so that it doesn't end up cutting off in the middle of it.

8D thank you so much, though.
LovexPeacexJoy Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah. I know exactly how you feel. XD

You're welcome! <333
xD I tend to forget where im going with things but im planning on taking this story a lot more seriously than in the past.

LovexPeacexJoy Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's great! Good luck on planning and writing it! <333

c: thank you so much
LovexPeacexJoy Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome! :heart:
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